Sunday, October 11, 2009

Sentence Ten

Out of the Dust by Karen Hesse

Her sentence: I think I should just let them rest, let the dust rest, let the world rest.

My thoughts: Hesse used repetition and parallelism to show similarity and further draw attention to the point of the sentence. She also uses asyndeton to make it seem that the list is incomplete.

My sentence: I will simply make a plan, make a change, make a stand.

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